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This piece is very expressive. I feel if that you darken the bright, happy colors a bunch, then it'll be perfection. Maybe lighten the ...


I feel that the cropped version tells a story about death, and the full version tells that the woman was taken from somewhere else to t...

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Amazing! The camera was amazing, the shot was amazing, therefore you are. I love that it was so close that you can see the whites of th...

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This piece is very expressive. I feel if that you darken the bright, happy colors a bunch, then it'll be perfection. Maybe lighten the background to show that YOU are the dark thing, and that you're not just in some terrible place. Also, this way we can see those amazing wings. Move the brow creases downwards a very, very small amount, so that we can see them more clearly. If I hadn't been looking closely, I would have thought of them as bits of hair. I love this look of pure anguish. Perhaps tweak the nose to help convey the emotion. It sort of looks like a limp ballon compared to this raging, broken creature. It would be really cool if you made little cracks at the side of your head, to represent what mental things are shattering you this way, since they are actually not visible. Overall, excellent piece, just needs a few tweaks, and I would buy it if I had the money, hah.
I AM ALIVE AND DREADFULLY SORRY
OKAY, MUCHACHOS, I HAVE BEEN VERY INACTIVE AND I NEED TO SUCK UP AND BE A GOOD OWNER OF THIS ACCOUNT SO I AM OFFICIALLY ALIVE NOW OKAY THANK YOU

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Avery McAlpin
Artist | Hobbyist | Varied
United States
I love animals, art, animation, literature, and.....HAMILTON!!! THE MUSICAL! I desperately wish that the main actors didn't leave. I'm a total fan. I do piano, flute, and ukelele. I have two dogs and one cat. (All of which I am hopelessly in love with.) I am a Virgo and I love a good laugh. I'm new now, and hopefully here to stay. I love this place!
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wolfanita Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017   General Artist
Thank you for the watch! :highfive:
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Bandarai Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017
Hi! Thank you for the watch! :heart:
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RaizaNoelia Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Your comments are always amazing and appreciated!! Thanks as always and thanks for the favs! 
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NIKON-AJ Featured By Owner Edited Dec 25, 2016   Photographer
Thanks for the Favourites
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Skiddley Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Np, you totally deserved it. Also, I want to look at the favorited again and again. I hoard. xD
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NIKON-AJ Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2016   Photographer
:D
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3wyl Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
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Skiddley Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Could I have more projects to comment on please? xD It's so fun.
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3wyl Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Would you like to make a 1000+ comment? :O
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Skiddley Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
xD *grits teeth and inhales sharply* If it's traditional art. I don't like digital...
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